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The bedsheets fall
Collapsing to the floor with more weight,
Yet more ease,
Than ever before

The silence breaks
Shattering into a cacophony of little crackles,
Little crackles the ear would,
At one time,
Ignore.

The walls flex
Arching with the wave of a hand,
With the breeze of a breath
With the passing of words,
Never before spoken aloud.

The world jolts
Erupting a kaleidoscope upon the books,
Upon the forks and the spoons,
Upon the beam we so carefully edge ourselves along.
Trying to desperately hard not to slip,
But teetering happily and daringly with every passing gust.

My eyes catch yours,
The world halts its motion
The colors cease to change
And I remember, with regret, that we're only one in spirit.
This will be edited, this was the first write of it, and I haven't even really proofread. So feel free to critique please =]


Betcha can't guess what its about =D


If you can, kudos. If not, it's still pretty emotional I think. Secretive, but emotional. I like things that way.
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TheseKrimzonFlames Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2009  Professional Writer
I likes. :nod:
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midnightkayla Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2009
thank you :love:
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TheseKrimzonFlames Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2009  Professional Writer
:glomp:
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rosiecakes Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2009
wow, your poetry has gotten loads better :D
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midnightkayla Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2009
thank you! =D
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rosiecakes Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2009
you're welcome :)
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